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CHANGES

I thought that nothing could be better again,

No matter how hard I tried I would never win.

Little did I know change would soon begin,

And my loneliness would come to an end.

Now my days are full with fun and laughter,

I know now what I was truely after.

Compassion and love were all my heart required,

So now I sit here full and complete,and can finally rest my head and goto sleep.

GODS CHILD

Beep,Beep,Beep,the monitor rang,

I'm only a kid!

My hair fell out,

My skin discolored,

Yet I'm only a kid.

No cure for me,

I have no say in the world,

I'm as hopeless as a stray dog looking for food,

And still, I'm only a kid.

Every night as I lay my head to goto sleep, I wonder if this Could be my last day, I don't deserve this worry, after all

I'm only a kid.

And one day when I lay motionless and rise I'll ask the Lord "why?"

He'll reply," Because you're my child and unfortunate things happen to innocent people."

I knew he was right,after all

I'm only a kid.

What do you think of these poems?

I was very touched thank you for sharing...good luck