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Fast Quick and easy ok??

What Poem sounds interesting to you ?

" Lost "

AT the touch of the wind i flee away with a whisper

Throughout the hemisphere I see fairies ith crinkled wings that have been warn out

In the sky I see an arrow making its way throught the earth

I feel the heavily racing wind going through my hair

I see a kid playing

Where Am I ?

In Tokyo

" cRYStals "

Ocean breeze

cool water

yellow moon

cold night

walking talking and happiness

we all see how the ocean works but do we see what's inside the ocean?

sea creatures

plants

AND,

CRYSTALS THAT SHINE THROUGH THE GLORIESS LIGHT.

Ok, I wrote these two poems by heart and Im only 11 YEARS Old and like , are these good poems for a 11 year old??

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Really good job! Keep writing. I think you're on to something : )

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WOW 11 year old Girl i am in amazing. NICE work!!!!!!! I LOVE IT. I will give you a A+++++++.

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Jesus does NOT rock, ok??!?!?

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Those are wonderful. Anytime you do something creative it is a good thing. Keep writing.

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Yes they are good. Now keep writing more.

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These are really good - I like the first one quite a bit. Impressive that you're only 11! Keep on writing!